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Post by derek on Dec 5, 2006 14:56:52 GMT -5
Ah man, why I gotta listen to ya, ya cant rap and you sho cant rhyme why I gotta listen to these boring lines man I just aint got the time why you trying so hard man, ya brains like ya name, B Holo and why they make me listen to these weak ole flows man i sick of gettin a 3 from this dumb new grada then you spit some crap, bout bein with my woman playa and he jumps around like he been taking it from you all night long dude, yall got sick stuff goin, so i know u wasn't with my woman homes so next time B Holo think about spittin these weak jokes ima call spyda so you can get off his ooops, dun choke see, then you gotta use dirty language cuz you too lame speak clean and still leave me hanging cuz ima drop ya jaw with this next rhyme brian cuz last night when i left ya house, ya momz was crying tellin me how seventeen years ago when i left ya house nine months later she dropped out a cryin mouth oh thats right son, im ya daddy and its tru, so dun get crazy, you already dreading the next step im gonna make, the next rhyme that you hear spake becuz you know you cant come back from this and i even touched on the choker got his diss see, i know why spyda gave ya a four cuz the choker did just that, while he was lyin on the floor so next time ya wanna rap about me from the heart remember the days when i took you out on the court cuz never, not once, have you outdone me and never, not once, will you ever be in my league!
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Post by derek on Dec 5, 2006 17:53:24 GMT -5
come on Spyda, I need these points for tonight... will you hurry up and grade it!
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Post by spyder on Dec 5, 2006 19:03:02 GMT -5
dawg the reason i give you a three is cuz you flow is bad. It is really scattered and crap so work on that and i will give you a better grade. 3.
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